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2016-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I think the reason I feel fear is ignore something. I try to know a fear object. Ignoring adds fear to human's mind. Although that kind of effort was done, If I feel still fear, It's time to pray to say my problem. And I have to ask God's help. I can't solve it with only my thought.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I do agree with you that prayer is the most powerful weapon to overcome every thing. According to the article that I have read, to overcome fear is fear itself. We need to face our fear and pray to God to give us the strength to overcome our fear. Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: I think the reason I feel fear is ignore something. >> The reason why we are afraid of something is that we don\'t have any idea of that thing.I try to know a fear object. >> I try get information on the things I am afraid of. Ignoring adds fear to human\'s mind. >> Having no knowledge about some things give us a reason to be afraid of those things.Although that kind of effort was done, If I feel still fear, It\'s time to pray to say my problem. >> If we can\'t overcome our fear, we should pray and ask God to give us the strength to face our fear.And I have to ask God\'s help. >> Let us ask God to help us.I can\'t solve it with only my thought. >> I can\'t solve my problems alone.

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