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2016-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Of course, I do agree with that people behave differently when the wear diffrent clothes. It doesn't mean that we have to wear expensive clothes. When we get dressed, we try to be more careful than when we wear casual clothes. Diffent clothes influence the way people act because we are educated when we get dressed, we are in impotant situations.. Hi! Can I ask a favor? Is it ok to chage the homework? I normally do my homework in break times so the time is not enough to do this essay homework. I would like to have grammar activities like some questions.. Can you change the homework?

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

Thanks for doing this homework.

Next time, I would give what you asked for.

I will provide grammar exercises.

See you again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? 
Of course, I do agree with that people behave differently when the wear diffrent clothes.

>> Of course, I do agree with people behaving differently when they wear different clothes.

 It doesn\'t mean that we have to wear expensive clothes.

>> Correct

When we get dressed, we try to be more careful than when we wear casual clothes.

>> Correct
 Diffent clothes influence the way people act because we are educated when we get dressed, we are in impotant situations..
>> Different clothes influence the way people act because we are educated that when we get dressed, we are in important events.
Hi!

>> Correct
 Can I ask a favor?

>> Correct
 Is it ok to chage the homework?

>> Correct
 I normally do my homework in break times so the time is not enough to do this essay homework.

>> Correct
 I would like to have grammar activities like some questions..

>> Correct
 Can you change the homework?

>> Correct

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