HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
Thanks for doing this homework.
Next time, I would give what you asked for.
I will provide grammar exercises.
See you again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave?
Of course, I do agree with that people behave differently when the wear diffrent clothes.
>> Of course, I do agree with people behaving differently when they wear different clothes.
It doesn\'t mean that we have to wear expensive clothes.
>> Correct
When we get dressed, we try to be more careful than when we wear casual clothes.
>> Correct
Diffent clothes influence the way people act because we are educated when we get dressed, we are in impotant situations..
>> Different clothes influence the way people act because we are educated that when we get dressed, we are in important events.
Hi!
>> Correct
Can I ask a favor?
>> Correct
Is it ok to chage the homework?
>> Correct
I normally do my homework in break times so the time is not enough to do this essay homework.
>> Correct
I would like to have grammar activities like some questions..
>> Correct
Can you change the homework?
>> Correct
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