HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Write out the best or the worst day of your life.
There are so many moments that I have had best days..
when every thing will be fine and good, that will be the best day.
It it really strange that when something happens bad, bad things occur just like chans.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름].
Thank you for doing the third homework.
However, this one has more corrections than
the other homework you did.
I hope you could review this one.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Write out the best or the worst day of your life.
There are so many moments that I have had best days..
>> There are so many best moments in my life.
when every thing will be fine and good, that will be the best day.
>> When every thing is fine and good, it will be a best day.
It it really strange that when something happens bad, bad things occur just like chans.
>> It is really strange when something bad happens or bad things occur by chance.
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