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2016-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi~ Did you have a good weekend? Can you change the homework? I don't think that reading fiction a waste of time. It is not real but we will also know other people's ideas and can learn creatives. It is better than reading nothing.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

I gave you grammar homework already.

Please check the corrections you had

here in this composition.

See you~

~~Teacher Erine~~

Hi~ Did you have a good weekend?

>> Correct
Can you change the homework?

>> Correct
I don\'t think that reading fiction a waste of time. 

>> I don\'t think that reading fiction is a waste of time.
 It is not real but we will also know other people\'s ideas and can learn creatives.

>>  It is not real but we will also know other people\'s ideas and can learn creativity.

It is better than reading nothing.

>> Correct

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