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Hello, teacher. Oigochu(오이고추) is a kind of chili pepper, which was develped as an improved species. So, it tastss like cucumber although it looks chili pepper. This is one of the popular vegetables in Korea. I'm not sure that my explanation is enough.^^ Below is my composition for my paper. Could you read and review this for me? This paper attempts to present Mencius’ unification theory in his book Mencius, one of the East Asia's Confucian Classics, and suggest modern implications for unification of the two Koreas based on this theory. Mencius claimed that a great country should serve a small one, and a small country should serve a large one as a way of regulating one’s maintenance of intercourse with neighbouring kingdom. This was one of the powerful reasons for China to justify keeping a tribute system with her neighbouring countries. However, is mutual coexistence of large countries and small ones the final destination of international order which Mencius intended?

Hello Kaylee! I still cannot picture a chili pepper that tastes like a cucumber. Or is it the other way around? Is it a cucumber that looks like a chili pepper? I\'m confused.   Anyway, please check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Oigochu(오이고추) is a kind of chili pepper, which was develped as an improved species. >> Oigochu(오이고추) is a kind of chili pepper, which was developed as an improved variety. So, it tastss like cucumber although it looks chili pepper. >> So it tastes like cucumber, but it looks like a chili pepper.This is one of the popular vegetables in Korea. >> CORRECT! I\'m not sure that my explanation is enough.^^>> I\'m not sure if my explanation is enough. Below is my composition for my paper. >> CORRECT! Could you read and review this for me?>> CORRECT! This paper attempts to present Mencius’ unification theory in his book Mencius, one of the East Asia\'s Confucian Classics, and suggest modern implications for unification of the two Koreas based on this theory. >> This paper attempts to present Mencius’ unification theory, in his book \"Mencius\", one of the East Asia\'s Confucian Classics, and suggest modern implications for the unification of the two Koreas based on this theory. Mencius claimed that a great country should serve a small one, and a small country should serve a large one as a way of regulating one’s maintenance of intercourse with neighbouring kingdom. >> Mencius claimed that a great country should serve a small one, and a small country should serve a large one, as a way of regulating one’s maintenance of intercourse with its neighbouring kingdoms. This was one of the powerful reasons for China to justify keeping a tribute system with her neighbouring countries. >> This was one of the main reasons why China keeps a tribute system with her neighbouring countries. However, is mutual coexistence of large countries and small ones the final destination of international order which Mencius intended? >> However, did Mencius intend to obtain international order through mutual coexistence of large and small countries?