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Mencius thought that the sovereign of the kingdom should appear and unify a whole country in order to lead an era of peace. Nevertheless, Mencius’ unification theory as the path to peace has not received much attention by the international relations theorists who pay attention to the way of relations with neighboring countries. This article will review how to interpret these two arguments, which look contradictory on the surface, and theorize about the unification of divided country by reconstructing Mencius’ unification theory in his book. After then, I will explore President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which was the unification policy of South Korea, and try to answer what are the implications for unification of the Korean Peninsula. I believe that the reconstruction of Mencius’ unification theory could provide modern implications for the two Koreas, who long for unification of the Korean Peninsula in order to meet an era of peace.
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>> CORRECT! Mencius thought that the sovereign of the kingdom should appear and unify a whole country in order to lead an era of peace.
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Nevertheless, Mencius’ unification theory as the path to peace has not received much attention by the international relations theorists who pay attention to the way of relations with neighboring countries.
>> Nevertheless, Mencius’ unification theory as the path to peace did not receive much attention from the international relations theorists, who pay attention to the way of relations with neighbouring countries.
This article will review how to interpret these two arguments, which look contradictory on the surface, and theorize about the unification of divided country by reconstructing Mencius’ unification theory in his book.
>> CORRECT!
After then, I will explore President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which was the unification policy of South Korea, and try to answer what are the implications for unification of the Korean Peninsula.
>> After that, I will explore President [이름] Dae-jung’s Sunshine Policy, which was the unification policy of South Korea, and try to answer what are the implications for the unification of the Korean Peninsula.
I believe that the reconstruction of Mencius’ unification theory could provide modern implications for the two Koreas, who long for unification of the Korean Peninsula in order to meet an era of peace.
>> I believe that the reconstruction of Mencius’ unification theory could provide modern implications for the two Koreas, which long for the unification of the Korean Peninsula in order to meet an era of peace.
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