HOMEWORK
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강사 첨삭
Here is the second one [이름]!
Thank you for writing a letter
expressing your concern towards a friend.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Write a letter persuading a friend to give up drugs.
To. My friend
>> To: My friend
How are you?
>> Correct
Suddenly, I remember that we had a good time..
>> Correct
We went to Australia togather and had exciting trips..
>> We went to Australia together and had exciting trips.
But nowadays I can\'t feel that we are good friends...
>> Correct
Every night, you go to the club and have drugs..
>> Every night, you go to clubs and have drugs.
I know that your life is yours however I am so worried about you.
>> Correct
I want to be with you just like before..
>> Correct
I will help you to stop drugs..
>> Correct
But remember I still love you whatever you do..
>> Correct
You can do it my friend!!!
>> Correct
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