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2016-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Write a letter persuading a friend to give up drugs. To. My friend How are you? Suddenly, I remember that we had a good time.. We went to Australia togather and had exciting trips.. But nowadays I can't feel that we are good friends... Every night, you go to the club and have drugs.. I know that your life is yours however I am so worried about you. I want to be with you just like before.. I will help you to stop drugs.. But remember I still love you whatever you do.. You can do it my friend!!!

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Thank you for writing a letter

expressing your concern towards a friend.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Write a letter persuading a friend to give up drugs.
To. My friend

>> To: My friend
 How are you?

>>  Correct
 Suddenly, I remember that we had a good time..

>> Correct
 We went to Australia togather and had exciting trips..

>> We went to Australia together and had exciting trips.
 But nowadays I can\'t feel that we are good friends...

>> Correct
 Every night, you go to the club and have drugs..

>> Every night, you go to clubs and have drugs.
 I know that your life is yours however I am so worried about you.

>> Correct
 I want to be with you just like before..

>> Correct
 I will help you to stop drugs..

>> Correct
 But remember I still love you whatever you do..

>> Correct
 You can do it my friend!!!

>> Correct

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