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2016-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Hello,Charry~ Today is homework say hello. I made my boyfriend lunch box in the morning. So l'm a little tired. hahaha Anyway I checked homework issue. I agree with this issue is important in human life. To conclude I think satisfaction is better than just pay. Work is not just how to make money. It is looking for identity. So it's important to having a objective. And have to draw a fine future.

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 Hello, my dear [이름]! ^^ Many people find the attainment of the things that make them happy as pleasurable and satisfying. They feel a sense of rush when they acquire or attain the things or the status that they want. However, it\'s part of human nature to desire for more once they get what they want. Most of us do not get contented with what we have that\'s why we strive or go after the things that we think would make us happy. This part of human nature is both beautiful and ugly at the same time. I see it as beautiful because it gives us the drive to become better but it\'s ugly as well because it makes a person more greedy and forget everything else that matters. I believe it\'s not really the attainment but the pursuit of the things that truly makes us happy that gives a person more pleasure and satisfaction. Primarily because it does not only give us something to look forward to but because it also provides a sense of fulfillment once you achieve your goal. I hope you are having a wonderful day!See you on our next class! I am looking forward to it! ^^Take care and God bless! ~Teacher Charry~ Hello,Charry~ >> Hello, Charry. Today is homework say hello. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Before answering our homework for today, I would like to say hello. I made my boyfriend lunch box in the morning. >> I prepared my boyfriend\'s lunch box this morning. So l\'m a little tired. hahaha >> So, l\'m a little tired. hahaha OR >> That\'s why, l\'m a little tired. hahahaAnyway I checked homework issue. >> Anyway, I checked the question for our homework. I agree with this issue is important in human life. >> I agree with this opinion and it is important in human life.To conclude I think satisfaction is better than just pay. >> In conclusion, I think satisfaction at work is better than just getting paid.Work is not just how to make money. >> Work is not just about how to make money. It is looking for identity. >> It is also looking for identity.So it\'s important to having a objective. And have to draw a fine future. >> So it\'s important to have an objective and draw a fine future.

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