homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
I know you have been busy because it has been a long time since I read your last composition. Anyway, it\'s good that you finally have time to do your homework again. Thank you for always making effort to do your homework.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, the medical technology is very important in our lives.
>>In my opinion, medical technology is very important in our lives.
It is very amazing
>>correct (you forgot to put a period)
Human can save many ill people with the medical technology.
>>Humans can save many ill people with the help of medical technology.
So I want my children to be a doctor in the future.
>>So I want my children to be doctors in the future.
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