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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
It\'s a great day to be alive!
Spoken like a worried mother. It\'s pretty obvious that you are really worried about your children\'s education. Maybe, by the time your children are going to college, you\'ll have a better education system too like New Zealand.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, New Zealand is in the best city in the world to live in.
>>correct grammar but New Zealand is a country so you could say:
>>>In my opinion Auckland (or Wellington, which is the capital of New Zealand) is the best city in the world to live in.
Because it has a free education system.
>>correct!
I heard that all New Zealander can learn a free education in school.
>>I heard that all New Zealanders can finish their education for free.
I envy it because we have to spend a lot of money to learn in Korea.
>>correct!
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