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학생이 쓴 원문
I hate them.
So I don't want to play these games to my children.
Also I don't play the games but my family like the games.
So I always tell them "Don't play the games."
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name]. [이름],
Well, most of the online games that children play nowadays are full of violence and bad words. I don\'t like it too but it\'s really hard to stop them from playing these games.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I hate them.
>>correct!
So I don\'t want to play these games to my children.
>>So I don\'t want my children to play these games.
Also I don\'t play the games but my family like the games.
>> I don\'t like my family to play the games but they like it.
So I always tell them \"Don\'t play the games.\"
>>So I always tell them \"Don\'t play those games.\"
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