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2016-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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In Korea, many women are working in hard environment office. There are men better than women in Korea most office. So, women don't get the chance with a promotion. Women work very hard and very well more than men. It is very difficult to get the chance in Korea environment office.

강사 첨삭

Hi Dear [이름]!

A wonderful Wednesday to you!

I think it\'s a cultural thing. Men are still seen as more powerful in your society. Well, hopefully things will change for the better on how they perceive women at work in your country.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

In Korea, many women are working in hard environment office.

>>In Korea, many women are working in a difficult environment.
There are men better than women in Korea most office.

>>In most offices in Korea, men are better than women.
So, women don\'t get the chance with a promotion.

>>So women don\'t get a chance to get a promotion.
Women work very hard and very well more than men.

>> Women work harder and better than men.
It is very difficult to get the chance in Korea environment office.

>>It is very difficult to get a chance in a Korean office.

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