homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Comic movies and animation movies are my favorite movies.
When I watch them, then make laugh to me.
So I can release my stress.
Also I like to watch them with my children. They like comic movies and animation movies too.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
A wonderful Wednesday to you!
Well, it\'s great that you have some interest you can share with your children. Why don\'t you watch English animations too so that you could learn while enjoying.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Comic movies and animation movies are my favorite movies.
>>correct!
When I watch them, then make laugh to me.
>>When I watch them, they make me laugh.
So I can release my stress.
>>correct!
Also I like to watch them with my children. They like comic movies and animation movies too.
>> correct!
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