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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear,
For me, I don\'t like Summer because it\'s too hot. But I don\'t think I\'d like Winter too because it would be so cold. If we have Spring in the Philippines, I think I\'d like that season best because it isn\'t too cold nor too hot. By the way, your Summer season is fast approaching, have fun!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
My favorite season is summer.
>>correct!
My family don\'t like summer because it is very difficult when they work and study with hot temperature.
>> correct!
But I like summer more than winter.
>> correct
OR>> I like Summer better than winter.
I can spend cool time in my office because of airconditioner.
>> It is cool in my office because of the air conditioner.
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