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학생이 쓴 원문
I want to stay at home for a vacation in your country.
Because many people move the good place for a vacation, so the street has a traffic jam.
I don't like it and it makes to me very tired.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
If you have time during your children\'s Summer vacation, you can visit the Philippines. If your family like swimming, we have a lot of places you can go to swim.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to stay at home for a vacation in your country.
>> I want to stay at home during vacation in my country.
Because many people move the good place for a vacation, so the street has a traffic jam.
>> Because many people go to good places during vacation so the street has a traffic jam.
I don\'t like it and it makes to me very tired.
>> I don\'t like it and it makes me very tired.
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