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2016-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I had fun with my parents and son at the weekend farm that I told you before. I'll tell you in detail next Monday. Please read and review my composition below. A little earlier, in 1995, (A) has argued that China’s modern foreign strategy can be understood in the relationship between modern Realism and the Confucian pacifism, which was originated from the traditional culture of East Asia. On the other hand, it is noteworthy that some scholars are trying to reconstruct the international relations theories from the traditional East Asian political thoughts. One of them is (B), who has suggested an international relations theory with Mencius, one of the Oriental Classics. He has argued, in his article, that Mencius’ ideas about international relations can be reconstructed in ways that correspond more closely to scientific methodology and then connected the debate on Hegemony and the Kingly way in Mencius to the role of G2, the US and China, and their future.

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Hello, Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I had fun with my parents and son at the weekend farm that I told you before. >> I had fun with my parents and my son at the weekend farm that I was telling you about.I\'ll tell you in detail next Monday. >> I\'ll tell you more details about it on Monday.Please read and review my composition below. >> CORRECT! A little earlier, in 1995, (A) has argued that China’s modern foreign strategy can be understood in the relationship between modern Realism and the Confucian pacifism, which was originated from the traditional culture of East Asia. >> CORRECT! On the other hand, it is noteworthy that some scholars are trying to reconstruct the international relations theories from the traditional East Asian political thoughts. >> CORRECT! One of them is (B), who has suggested an international relations theory with Mencius, one of the Oriental Classics. >> CORRECT! He has argued, in his article, that Mencius’ ideas about international relations can be reconstructed in ways that correspond more closely to scientific methodology and then connected the debate on Hegemony and the Kingly way in Mencius to the role of G2, the US and China, and their future. >> In his article, he has argued that Mencius’ ideas about international relations can be reconstructed in ways that correspond more closely to scientific methodology. He then connected the debate on Hegemony and the Kingly way in Mencius to the role of G2, the U.S. and China, and their future.

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