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Namuk Cho also takes note of the Confucian theory of international peace, and emphasizes that the Confucianism has the principle of international coexistence and mutual respect while citing the Mencius’ way of diplomatic intercourse between the great power and small countries.
As the above studies show, we can easily discover that most of the studies explaining the international order in Ancient China mentioned, directly or indirectly, the Confucian ideas, more precisely, the book Mencius.
This has functioned effectively in justifying the tribute-investiture system, which had been maintained between China and her neighbors in Chinese history.
As I mentioned above, Mencius 1B3 has attained the east’s and west’s attention among most of the IR theorists regarding the traditional East Asian international order.
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>> CORRECT! Please read and review my composition below.>> CORRECT! Namuk Cho also takes note of the Confucian theory of international peace, and emphasizes that the Confucianism has the principle of international coexistence and mutual respect while citing the Mencius’ way of diplomatic intercourse between the great power and small countries. >> Namuk Cho also takes note of the Confucian theory of international peace and emphasizes that Confucianism has the principle of international coexistence and mutual respect, while citing Mencius’s way of diplomatic intercourse between the great power and small countries.
As the above studies show, we can easily discover that most of the studies explaining the international order in Ancient China mentioned, directly or indirectly, the Confucian ideas, more precisely, the book Mencius. >> As the above studies show, we can easily discover that most of the studies explaining the international order in Ancient China mentioned, directly or indirectly, the Confucian ideas and, more precisely, the book of Mencius.
This has functioned effectively in justifying the tribute-investiture system, which had been maintained between China and her neighbors in Chinese history. >> This has functioned effectively in justifying the tribute-investiture system, which had been maintained between China and its neighbors in Chinese history.As I mentioned above, Mencius 1B3 has attained the east’s and west’s attention among most of the IR theorists regarding the traditional East Asian international order.
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