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학생이 쓴 원문
Youth will never come back.
However most people want to last their youth.
Of coures, I want it.
So these days many people exercise for their health and youth.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Have you heard about the fountain of youth? Even a long time ago, people had been wishing and looking for ways of staying young forever. So there is this myth about a fountain wherein you could drink the water from it and you will stay young forever. Ha! I wish that is true.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Youth will never come back.
>>correct!
However most people want to last their youth.
>>However, most people want to stay young longer.
Of coures, I want it.
>>Of course, I want that too.
So these days many people exercise for their health and youth.
>>So these days many people exercise for their health and to stay young.
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