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I will last my body like youth and I will visit a lot of countries with my family or my husband.
And I will move a new house for my children.
Also I will repay my debt.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
If we have money we could do a lot of things that we can only do in our dreams. But then it is hard to earn enough money to buy all the things we wish we could have or visit places we wish to see. Here in the real world, only the lucky people could do that. So sad....
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I will last my body like youth and I will visit a lot of countries with my family or my husband.
>>I will make my body look younger and I will visit a lot of countries with my family or my husband.And I will move a new house for my children.
>>I will move to a new house for my children.Also I will repay my debt.
>>correct!
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