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2016-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think the medicine will be change in the future. For example, people don't go to the hospatil to check their health. Maybe they can check in their house with medicine computer. So many doctors have to study it and learn it.

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Hi Ms. [이름]!   A blessed day to you! Development in technology is really fast so I wouldn\'t be surprise if what you said will happen in the future. That would be awesome if it happens. It\'s very convenient.   Take care! ~T. Lynn   I think the medicine will be change in the future. >>correctFor example, people don\'t go to the hospatil to check their health. >>For example. people won\'t have to go to the hospital for check up.Maybe they can check in their house with medicine computer. >> Maybe they can do the check up in their houses using computers.So many doctors have to study it and learn it. >>correct!

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