homework!
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It is important for students to move to a new school. As school life influences to people’s lives for a long time, all students should have a stable school life. In school life, some students sometimes move to a new school then they might face some problem as a new. For me, I don’t have any experience of transferring however I saw many cases in person in school. Most problems that happened to them were about maladjustment. so I found the importance of role of school for this. There are some measures to advise first, the school have to keep pay attention to new students until they get used to like making a team with sociable classmates and giving a feedback to parents. Next, the school doesn’t have to look on new students or what happen to them.
Especially if they feel out of place, teacher has to look after them. As I heard about this, some teachers look on student’s maladjustment and even bullying. If not, it can make bigger problem like what we sometimes find out in news headline
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==Teacher Charlie==
It is important for students to move to a new school. As school life influences to people’s lives for a long time, all students should have a stable school life. In school life, some students sometimes move to a new school then they might face some problem as a new.
>> It is ideal for students to have a stable school life since academic life has a lasting influence on a person\'s life. Although due to unavoidable reasons, they might have to switch schools and new problems might arise.
For me, I don’t have any experience of transferring however I saw many cases in person in school. Most problems that happened to them were about maladjustment. so I found the importance of role of school for this. There are some measures to advise first, the school have to keep pay attention to new students until they get used to like making a team with sociable classmates and giving a feedback to parents. Next, the school doesn’t have to look on new students or what happen to them. Especially if they feel out of place, teacher has to look after them. As I heard about this, some teachers look on student’s maladjustment and even bullying. If not, it can make bigger problem like what we sometimes find out in news headline
>> I don\'t have any experiences of transferring to new schools although I have seen people who do and most of the problems they face is not being able to adjust to their new environment. In this case, the school, i.e. faculty and staff, should then step in by paying attention to the new student until they are comfortable making social interactions especially if not fitting in poses the threat of bullying. After giving proper feedback to the student\'s parents, the school now can step back and allow the student to be on his/her own.
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