Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Problem is my age.
I still have a bachache.
So, I took a muscle relaxant.
I seem to be less resilient than I was. ㅠㅠ
Please read and review below.
Korean scholar Namuk Cho interpreted, in his 2011 article A Study on the Confucian Theory of International Peace(italic font), “serving the great country and small one” in Mencius 1B3 as aiming to the international order having the principle of coexistence and mutual respect and pursuing equal and mutual benefit.
The same part has also been construed that large and small states can flourish in harmony and mutual respect by Western scholar Jeremy Paltiel.
Modern scholars are not alone in interpreting Mencius 1B3 in that way. “Serving the great country and the small one” has functioned effectively in justifying the tribute-investiture system, which had been maintained between China and her neighbors in East Asian history.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! Don\'t worry, we are all aging. Age is just a number anyway.
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!Problem is my age.
>> The problem is my age.
OR >> My age is the problem.
I still have a bachache.
>> I still have a backache.So, I took a muscle relaxant.
>> So I took a muscle relaxant.I seem to be less resilient than I was. ㅠㅠ
>> I seem to be less resilient than before.
Please read and review below.
>> Please read and review the text below.Korean scholar Namuk Cho interpreted, in his 2011 article A Study on the Confucian Theory of International Peace(italic font), “serving the great country and small one” in Mencius 1B3 as aiming to the international order having the principle of coexistence and mutual respect and pursuing equal and mutual benefit.
>> In his 2011 article, \"A Study on the Confucian Theory of International Peace\", Korean scholar Namuk Cho interpreted “serving the great country and small one” in Mencius 1B3 as aiming to the international order having the principle of coexistence and mutual respect and pursuing equal and mutual benefit.The same part has also been construed that large and small states can flourish in harmony and mutual respect by Western scholar Jeremy Paltiel.
>> CORRECT!Modern scholars are not alone in interpreting Mencius 1B3 in that way.
>> CORRECT!
“Serving the great country and the small one” has functioned effectively in justifying the tribute-investiture system, which had been maintained between China and her neighbors in East Asian history.
>> CORRECT!
>> its
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