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2016-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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It is very difficult. When my children were very young, I didn't want to work. I wanted to take care of them by myself. However I couldn't do it because I had to save money for my family's future. I was very sad and I was very angry to husband who was not rich. Now, my children can do a lot of thins by themself. My help don't need a lot to them. I want to work for a long time in my office because of my family's future.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],   Well, you are a mom so you always have to take into consideration your children\'s future. But then like you said, they are growing up so time will come when they\'ll have their own lives so think also about your future. Enjoy your lunch! Take care! ~T. Lynn   It is very difficult. >>correct!When my children were very young, I didn\'t want to work. >>correct!I wanted to take care of them by myself. >>correct!However I couldn\'t do it because I had to save money for my family\'s future. >>However, I couldn\'t do that now because I have to save money fo my family\'s future.I was very sad and I was very angry to husband who was not rich. >>I was very sad and angry to my husband because he is not rich.Now, my children can do a lot of thins by themself. >> Now, my children can do a lot of things by themselves.My help don\'t need a lot to them. >> They don\'t need my help anymore.I want to work for a long time in my office because of my family\'s future. >> correct! OR>> I want to work for a long time to save for my family\'s future.

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