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Hello Ms. [이름],
Happy Tuesday!
Oh, I\'m guessing you had some time yesterday so you were able to make your homework. Thank you so much for taking some time from your very busy day to make your homework. See you tomorrow.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Sometimes, I miss the past because I want to meet my parent but when I was young, my family was not rich.
>>sometimes, I miss the past because I want to meet my parents again but when I was young, my family was not rich.
So my memory of the past is very hard.
>>correct
Now I can save money with my husband but working is very difficult.
>> correct
However I will work very hard for my future.
>>correct
I become old woman somedays.
>>I feel like an old woman some days.
Also I can work because of my age.
>>correct
I think the future is very important in our lives.
>>correct
We have to live very hard for our future.
>> correct
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