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학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that, "All men are born equal"
But crazy some rich men and women disagree.
I can't understand them.
But I can't do somethings.
So I am very upset and sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Actually, I think I disagree with this quote. I think we are not born with equal opportunities. Some are born lucky and some aren\'t.
But it\'s up to us to do something so that we won\'t be forever unlucky. Have a fun day!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I believe that, \"All men are born equal\"
>>correct
But crazy some rich men and women disagree.
>>But some crazy rich men and women disagree.
I can\'t understand them.
>>correct
But I can\'t do somethings.
>>But I can\'t do some things.
So I am very upset and sad.
>>correct
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