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2016-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Since last night, it has been raining in my city.^^ Please read and review below. Within the text of Mencius, however, there are no grounds for understanding this chapter as what’s about bilateral relations between the great country and the small one. Mencius cites the cases of kings like Tang and Wen while insisting that it requires a perfectly virtuous prince to be able, with a great country, to serve a small one. King Tang and Wen were not only perfectly virtuous princes but also the sovereigns of a great country. On the other hand, Ge and the Kun barbarians, who were served by King Tang and Wen, were the sovereigns of a small country, but they were not wise princes. The same is true of serving the great country with a small one. As a wise prince, king Tai and Gou Jian served the Xun Yu and Wu, the great countries, respectively. Here, Xun Yu and Wu were the great countries, but the sovereigns of those countries were not perfectly virtuous princes.

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Hello, Kaylee! I checked your composition here. Please review my corrections. ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Since last night, it has been raining in my city.^^>> CORRECT! Please read and review below. >> Please read and review the text below.Within the text of Mencius, however, there are no grounds for understanding this chapter as what’s about bilateral relations between the great country and the small one. >> CORRECT! Mencius cites the cases of kings like Tang and Wen while insisting that it requires a perfectly virtuous prince to be able, with a great country, to serve a small one. >> Mencius cites the cases of kings, like Tang and Wen, while insisting that, with a great country, it requires a perfectly virtuous prince to be able to serve a small one. King Tang and Wen were not only perfectly virtuous princes but also the sovereigns of a great country. >> King Tang and Wen were not only perfectly virtuous princes but were also the sovereigns of great countries. On the other hand, Ge and the Kun barbarians, who were served by King Tang and Wen, were the sovereigns of a small country, but they were not wise princes. >> On the other hand, Ge and the Kun barbarians, who were served by King Tang and Wen, were the sovereigns of small countries, but they were not wise princes.The same is true of serving the great country with a small one. >> The same is true of serving a great country with a small one.As a wise prince, king Tai and Gou Jian served the Xun Yu and Wu, the great countries, respectively. >> As wise princes, King Tai and Gou Jian served the Xun Yu and Wu, two great countries, respectively. Here, Xun Yu and Wu were the great countries, but the sovereigns of those countries were not perfectly virtuous princes. >> Here, Xun Yu and Wu were great countries, but the sovereigns of those countries were not perfectly virtuous princes.

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