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2016-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I am changing my life to have a good work-life. I am waking up early to attend your class this year. I am very lazy so it is not easy to me. And I am exercising every week night this year. So I think I tried to become a diligent woman. It make me to have a good work-life balance. Hi. Could I ask you someting? Sometimes I can't understand your speaking. So could you tell me about your opinion slowly for me in our class?

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

 

Thank you for making your homework always. Writing is also a good way to improve your English skills. Well done Ms. [이름]!

You can ask me anything you don\'t understand in class either it is regarding the homework for the day or about our lesson. I will explain it to you. See you tomorrow!

 

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

I am changing my life to have a good work-life.

>>correct!
I am waking up early to attend your class this year.

>>correct!
I am very lazy so it is not easy to me.

>>correct!
And I am exercising every week night this year.

>>correct!
So I think I tried to become a diligent woman.
>>So I think I am trying to be a diligent woman.

It make me to have a good work-life balance.

>>It makes me have a good work-life balance.

 

Hi.

>>correct!
Could I ask you something?

>>correct!
Sometimes I can\'t understand your speaking.

>>Sometimes, I can\'t understand what you mean.
So could you tell me about your opinion slowly for me in our class?

>>correct!

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