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Hello Ms. [이름],
Wow! that was fast. You sent your homework for today already. I guess you had a bit of a free time. Job well done Ms. [이름]!
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Take care!
~T. Lynn
I agree.
>>correct!
In my eldest daughter, she was very slim when she was 10 years.
>>In my eldest daughter\'s case, she was very slim when she was ten years old.
However after she was 10 years, she ate a lot of delicious foods also she liked eat fast foods.
>> However when she turned 11, she ate a lot of delicious food and she also like eating fast food.
She is not slim now.
>>correct!
She wants go back when she was 10 years.
>>She wants to go back when she was ten.
Anyway, in my opinion, eating we become our body and health.
>> Anyway, in my opinion, what we eat become our body and health.
So I will become a woman exercising.
>>So I will become a woman who exercise regularly.
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