Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I'm looking for a hotel I'm going to stay in Tokyo.
That is unexpected price range.
I mean it's too expensive. ㅠㅠ
I realize that the cost of living in Japan is high.
Please read and review my composition below.
Sub title :'Serving the Great Country and the Small One' As a Way for Unification
As stated above, a number of IR theorists of our times have raised Mencius 1B3 while emphasizing that the traditional East Asian order was aimed at mutual coexistence of the great country and small ones.
However, did Mencius intend to obtain international order through mutual coexistence of large and small countries?
Mencius didn't think so.
In the above quotation, he says that someone who has no pleasure in killing men, namely who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite the whole country.
Furthermore, every country, regardless of its size, can achieve the unification, if the sovereign dispenses a benevolent government to the people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kaylee! I read and checked your composition below.
Please review my corrections.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I\'m looking for a hotel I\'m going to stay in Tokyo.
>> I\'m looking for a hotel in Tokyo. That is unexpected price range.>> The price range was unexpected.
I mean it\'s too expensive. ㅠㅠ
>> I mean, it\'s too expensive.I realize that the cost of living in Japan is high.>> I realized that the cost of living in Japan is high.
Please read and review my composition below.>> CORRECT!
Sub title :\'Serving the Great Country and the Small One\' As a Way for Unification
>> Sub-title: \"Serving the Great Country and the Small One as a Way for Unification\".
As stated above, a number of IR theorists of our times have raised Mencius 1B3 while emphasizing that the traditional East Asian order was aimed at mutual coexistence of the great country and small ones.
>> CORRECT! However, did Mencius intend to obtain international order through mutual coexistence of large and small countries?
>> CORRECT! Mencius didn\'t think so.
>> CORRECT! In the above quotation, he says that someone who has no pleasure in killing men, namely who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite the whole country.
>> In the above quotation, he says that someone who has no pleasure in killing men, namely one who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite the whole country.
Furthermore, every country, regardless of its size, can achieve the unification, if the sovereign dispenses a benevolent government to the people.
>> Furthermore, every country, regardless of its size, can achieve unification if the sovereign dispenses a benevolent government to the people.
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