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2016-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Arlene Black's new CD is now available in the shops. Write the titles of her songs. Use these words instead of the ones in brackets: as soon as, before, since, when, while, until Example: Think of me (during the time) I'm away = Think of me while I'm away. 1 I'll love you until I die 2 I hear music when I see you 3 Come back before forget you 4 I've been sad since you left me 5 I fell in love as soon as we met

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]!
Thank you for answering the homework.

There was only a minor mistake in the

third sentence.

But it\'s manageable.

Take care!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Arlene Black\'s new CD is now available in the shops. Write the titles of her songs.
Use these words instead of the ones in brackets: as soon as, before, since, when, while, until
Example: Think of me (during the time) I\'m away = Think of me while I\'m away.
1 I\'ll love you until I die

>> Correct
2 I hear music when I see you

>> Correct

3 Come back before forget you

>> Come back before I forget you
4 I\'ve been sad since you left me

>> Correct
5 I fell in love as soon as we met

>> Correct

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