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As the quotation (A) shows, Mencius tried to empirically prove that someone who dispenses a benevolent government to the people can unify the whole country by giving specific two examples, the king Tang and the king Wen.
Moreover, the quotation (B) clarifies that imitating king Wen, namely dispensing a benevolent government to the people leads to unify the whole country.
The lead time is simply different.
It takes 5 years if one’s country is a great power, whereas it takes 7 years if one’s country is a small one.
If so, why did Mencius, who thought that the sovereign of the kingdom should appear and unify a whole country in order to lead an era of peace, suggest the way to maintain foreign relations through “serving the great country” and “serving the small country”?
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~Teacher Marie~
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>> CORRECT! It\'s a sunny Friday.
>> CORRECT! Have a nice weekend and see you on Monday.^^
>> CORRECT! Please read and review below.>> Please read and review the text below.
As the quotation (A) shows, Mencius tried to empirically prove that someone who dispenses a benevolent government to the people can unify the whole country by giving specific two examples, the king Tang and the king Wen.
>> As the quotation (A) shows, Mencius tried to empirically prove that someone who dispenses a benevolent government to the people can unify the whole country by giving two specific examples, King Tang and King Wen.
Moreover, the quotation (B) clarifies that imitating king Wen, namely dispensing a benevolent government to the people leads to unify the whole country.>> Moreover, the quotation (B) clarifies that imitating King Wen, which means dispensing a benevolent government to the people, will unify the whole country.The lead time is simply different.
>> The time of leading is simply different.It takes 5 years if one’s country is a great power, whereas it takes 7 years if one’s country is a small one.
>> It takes 5 years if one’s country has great power, whereas it takes 7 years if one’s country is a small one.If so, why did Mencius, who thought that the sovereign of the kingdom should appear and unify a whole country in order to lead an era of peace, suggest the way to maintain foreign relations through “serving the great country” and “serving the small country”?
>> If so, why did Mencius, who thought that the sovereign of the kingdom should appear and unify a whole country in order to lead an era of peace, suggest that the way to maintain foreign relations is through “serving the great country” and “serving the small country”?
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