Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I think you perfectly understand my compositions.
Moreover, if you misunderstand my intention, it would be my fault.
In those cases, I will try to change them easy to understand sentences.
Thank you so much helping my hard tasks.^^
It seems rational that he paradoxically mentioned it because of the reality of his time, which he couldn’t imagine a bilateral relations of the great power and the small countries.
Let’s see the following quotation.
Teng, as a small country, was suffering from the great country even though Teng was serving the great country.
A long time ago, King Tai also served the barbarians of the north, who had a big country, in manifold ways, but the great country’s invasion and exploitation were persisted.
In other words, Mencius confirms the situation in China’s Warring States Period that a great country never serves a small one even though small country serves a great one.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! I\'m sorry if I misunderstood some of your sentences here. I tried my best.
Please check my corrections and let me know if they are appropriate.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT!I think you perfectly understand my compositions.
>> CORRECT!Moreover, if you misunderstand my intention, it would be my fault.
>> CORRECT!In those cases, I will try to change them easy to understand sentences.
>> In that case, I will try to change them into sentences which are easier to understand.Thank you so much helping my hard tasks.^^
>> Thank you so much for helping me with my hard tasks.It seems rational that he paradoxically mentioned it because of the reality of his time, which he couldn’t imagine a bilateral relations of the great power and the small countries.>> It seems rational that he paradoxically mentioned it because of the reality of his time, in which he couldn’t imagine bilateral relations of the great power and the small countries.
Let’s see the following quotation.>> CORRECT!
Teng, as a small country, was suffering from the great country even though Teng was serving the great country.
>> Teng, as a small country, was suffering from the great country even though it was serving the great country.A long time ago, King Tai also served the barbarians of the north, who had a big country, in manifold ways, but the great country’s invasion and exploitation were persisted.>> A long time ago, King Tai also served the barbarians of the north who had a big country, in manifold ways, but the great country’s invasion and exploitation persisted.
In other words, Mencius confirms the situation in China’s Warring States Period that a great country never serves a small one even though small country serves a great one.
>> In other words, Mencius confirms that the situation in China’s Warring States Period is where a great country never serves a small one, even though a small country serves a great one.
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