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2016-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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We don't need to try everything all at once. I always say to my children "Don’t try to learn everything at once. You have much time in your lives so when you learn sometings, I need to learn sometings setp by setp."

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

I am sure I told you before, but I will tell you again- you are a good mom. You always think what is best for your children. I hope your children appreciate what you do for them. Have a great day!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

We don\'t need to try everything all at once.
>>correct!

I always say to my children \"Don’t try to learn everything at once. You have much time in your lives so when you learn sometings, I need to learn sometings setp by setp.\"

>>I always say to my children, \"Don\'t try to learn everything at once. You have much time in your lives so when you learn some things, you need to learn them step by step\".

OR>> I always tell my children not to try to learn everything at once. They have the rest of their lives to learn many things so they need to learn them step by step.

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