homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jane
Thank you for your teaching
I was bone in Gwacheon, Gyonggi-do, South Korea and 46 years old
I was major Industrial Engineering in university and Systems Engieering in graduate school
I have been worked Logistics Area for 18th years. I took charge mostly process improvement and consulting for W&D(Warehouse and Distribution)
I've worked in this company for five years and now I charge in W&D operations team leader
Recently, I failed in moving to good position of international firm due to english
I want to speack in freedom by english through this class, so I want to remove constaint of "English Speaking"
I expect you help my english capabilty increasing
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Alec!
Thanks for your composition today! It\'s an honor to have you as my student. I hope that you will feel comfortable with me. Please feel free to express your thoughts and to give some suggestions. Let\'s work hard together. We can do it!T. JanE ^^
Hi Jane>> Correct Thank you for your teaching>> Correct
I was bone in Gwacheon, Gyonggi-do, South Korea and 46 years old>> I was born in Gwacheon, Gyonggi-do, South Korea. I am 46 years old.
I was major Industrial Engineering in university and Systems Engieering in graduate school>> I majored in Industrial Engineering in the university, and Systems Engineering in Graduate School.
I have been worked Logistics Area for 18th years.
>> I have been working in the Logistics field for 18 years.
I took charge mostly process improvement and consulting for W&D(Warehouse and Distribution)>> I am in charge of mostly process improvement and consulting for W&D (Warehouse and Distribution).
I\'ve worked in this company for five years and now I charge in W&D operations team leader>> I\'ve worked in this company for five years, and now I\'m in charge of W&D operations team leader.
Recently, I failed in moving to good position of international firm due to english>> Recently, I failed in being promoted to a higher position in an international firm due to my poor English skills.
I want to speack in freedom by english through this class, so I want to remove constaint of \"English Speaking\">> I want to speak English freely through this class.
I expect you help my english capabilty increasing
>> I expect you to help me improve my English communication skills.
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