homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
A blessed Tuesday to you!
Your hometown sounds interesting. I would love to visit there if I am given a chance. Nice sentences Ms. [이름]! See you later.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I am living in the countryside.
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It is not famous.
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However it has a big lake called Pyeongtaek Lake.
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So I recommend it.
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You can do camping there with your family.
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Also you want to eat some white foods.
>>You can also eat some white foods. (But what is a white food?)
You can eat fresh them there.
>>You can eat it fresh from there.
And an small amusement park is located next to it.
>>And a small amusement park is located next to it.
Many children like to visit there.
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