Homework

2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: In, At or On 1. It gets very cold in winter. 2. Betty doesn't have a job at the moment. 3. The telephone and the doorbell rang at the same time. 4. He flew from Japan. He's probably on Perth now. 5. Would you like to go out to dinner on Friday night? -- Thanks a lot teacher Carmen!! <3<3<3 I'm so reassured because of you. T.T By the way, this is my report title : Proposal of the Mandated Bill which is the Review of the Domestic Database Trading Market And, it is right that I wrote my information myself : Undergraduate of Convergence Security, Sungshin W. Univ, Seoul, Korea Last night, I wrote 1 paragraph only. Woo~ kkkkk I will start to write it again. Thank you and see you later!

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday, [이름]! ^^   How are you? I hope that you are doing fine. ^^ It is my pleasure to be able to help you in the best way I can. Don\'t worry about it. I will always try my best to help you. I hope that we can deliver the right information that you need in your report. You can just correct me if there is something wrong or maybe something that I misunderstood. See you later!!! :)   Love, Teacher Carmen ^^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:In, At or On1. It gets very cold in winter.>> Correct!2. Betty doesn\'t have a job at the moment.>> Correct!3. The telephone and the doorbell rang at the same time.>> Correct!4. He flew from Japan. He\'s probably on Perth now.>> in5. Would you like to go out to dinner on Friday night?>> Correct!--Thanks a lot teacher Carmen!! <3<3<3 >> Correct! I\'m so reassured because of you. T.T >> Correct! By the way, this is my report title : Proposal of the Mandated Bill which is the Review of the Domestic Database Trading Market>> By the way, this is the title of my report: A Proposal For The Mandated Bill Regarding The Overview Of The Domestic Database Trading MarketAnd, it is right that I wrote my information myself : Undergraduate of Convergence Security, Sungshin W. Univ, Seoul, Korea>> Personal information: Undergraduate of Convergence Security, Sungshin W. University, Seoul, KoreaLast night, I wrote 1 paragraph only. Woo~ kkkkk I will start to write it again. Thank you and see you later! >> I only wrote 1 paragraph last night. Wooo~ kkkkk I will start writing again. Thank you and see you later.  

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