Homework

2016-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. I like your corrections and vocabulary you suggested.^^ I've learned a lot through your corrections. I'd like to ask you to read and review the next part of my paper. In conclusion, Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one”, not because he hoped for peaceful coexistence between the great and small countries. He intended to present the way to unify a whole country depending on the size of one’s country. In this respect, this paper argues that Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one” as a way for unification of a whole country. Mencius, as explained above, stated that one who has no pleasure in killing men, namely one who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite the whole country. In this section, I will logically reconstruct Mencius’ unification theory, which argues that a true royal sovereign can achieve the unification of a whole country.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee! I read and reviewed your composition below. Please take note of the proper use of articles (a, an, the). Check my corrections here. Good luck with your paper! Have an awesome day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I like your corrections and vocabulary you suggested.^^>> I like your corrections and the vocabulary that you suggested. I\'ve learned a lot through your corrections.>> CORRECT! I\'d like to ask you to read and review the next part of my paper.>> CORRECT! In conclusion, Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one”, not because he hoped for peaceful coexistence between the great and small countries. >> In conclusion, Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one”, not because he hoped for peaceful coexistence between the great and the small countries.He intended to present the way to unify a whole country depending on the size of one’s country.>> He intended to present a way to unify a whole country based on its size. In this respect, this paper argues that Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one” as a way for unification of a whole country.>> In this respect, this paper argues that Mencius suggested “serving a great country and a small one” as a way for the unification of a whole country.Mencius, as explained above, stated that one who has no pleasure in killing men, namely one who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite the whole country.>> Mencius, as explained above, stated that one who has no pleasure in killing men, namely one who dispenses a benevolent government to the people, can unite a whole country. In this section, I will logically reconstruct Mencius’ unification theory, which argues that a true royal sovereign can achieve the unification of a whole country. >> In this section, I will logically reconstruct Mencius’s unification theory, which argues that a true royal sovereign can achieve the unification of a whole country.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·