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2016-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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1. Having seen the movie three times. fragment 2. We didn’t know he was waiting we’re sorry. COMPLETE 3. We’re sorry that we didn’t call you earlier. COMPLETE 4. Where did you grow up? COMPLETE 5. As he started to tell us about his travels. fragment 6. I realized that he was drunk I could tell from the way he was speaking. COMPLETE 7. This hotel is very comfortable we recommend it. RUN ON 8. Yes, I do know what you mean. COMPLETE 9. In light of the information that I’ve obtained. COMPLETE 10. Ever since I fell in love with her.COMPLETE

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^

[이름], thank you for answering your homework again.

I know that it may be confusing when it comes

to this topic.

But I hope you can review the corrections I have for you.

See you then!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

1. Having seen the movie three times. fragment

>> Correct
2. We didn’t know he was waiting we’re sorry. COMPLETE

>> RUN ON
3. We’re sorry that we didn’t call you earlier. COMPLETE

>> Correct
4. Where did you grow up? COMPLETE

>> Correct
5. As he started to tell us about his travels. fragment

>> Correct
6. I realized that he was drunk I could tell from the way he was speaking.
>> RUN ON
7. This hotel is very comfortable we recommend it. RUN ON

>> Correct
8. Yes, I do know what you mean. COMPLETE

>> Correct
9. In light of the information that I’ve obtained. COMPLETE

>> FRAGMENT
10. Ever since I fell in love with her.COMPLETE

>> FRAGMENT

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