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Oh my gosh, thank you so much teacher Carmen!! T.T I'm really sorry that I made you tired. I will do much better in our class!! And I adjuseted the abstract that you send me! Please check the grammar of the following sentences. According to the information that was taken from the database trading market is activated, the number of DB trading market that were sold or bought the personal information increased in a large number. The legitimate DB trade that hid some information that can identify the individuals has increased in number, however the illegal DB trading market also increased rapidly. On the other hand, it is allowed to have 2 and 3 rounds of damages which is caused by the DB trade because the current law of the DB trading market is not yet defined. Therefore, this proposed 5 bills to decrease the illegal trade of the DB and reduce the damages. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Plural Forms and Irregular Nouns What is the correct PLURAL FORM of the word inside the parenthesis? 1. How many persons study English as a second language? 2. Five women opened a computer services company. 3. Even children enjoy learning on the Internet. 4. Most basketball players are 6 feet tall or more. 5. Which breed of sheep produces the finest wool?

Happy Thursday, [이름]! ^^   It\'s okay. I\'m just trying to help you the best way that I can. :) Just tell me if the information is correct. We can do this!!! Aja!!! See you later!   Teacher Carmen ^^   Oh my gosh, thank you so much teacher Carmen!! T.T >> Correct! I\'m really sorry that I made you tired. >> Correct! I will do much better in our class!! >> I will do my best in our class!! And I adjuseted the abstract that you send me! >> I edited the abstract that you have sent to me. Please check the grammar of the following sentences.>> Correct!According to the information that was taken from the database trading market is activated, the number of DB trading market that were sold or bought the personal information increased in a large number. >> According to the updated information that was taken from the database trading market, the number of the DB trading market which contained some personal information were sold or bought in an increasingly large amount.The legitimate DB trade that hid some information that can identify the individuals has increased in number, however the illegal DB trading market also increased rapidly. >> The legal DB trade which is responsible for identifying and hiding an individual\'s personal information had increased in number. However, the illegal DB trade had also increased rapidly in number.On the other hand, it is allowed to have 2 and 3 rounds of damages which is caused by the DB trade because the current law of the DB trading market is not yet defined. >> On the other hand, it is allowed to have at least 2 or 3 rounds of damages that is caused by the DB trade because the current law about it is not yet defined.Therefore, this proposed 5 bills to decrease the illegal trade of the DB and reduce the damages.>> Therefore, this fact had proposed 5 bills to lessen the illegal DB trade and to reduce the damages that it cause.HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Plural Forms and Irregular NounsWhat is the correct PLURAL FORM of the word inside the parenthesis?1. How many persons study English as a second language? >> people2. Five women opened a computer services company. >> Correct!3. Even children enjoy learning on the Internet. >> Correct!4. Most basketball players are 6 feet tall or more. >> Correct!5. Which breed of sheep produces the finest wool? >> Correct!