Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello KC!!!!
Once again, thank you for your homework.
I really had a great time with you today.Your answers are full of life. You gave a lot of insights:)
I can see that you really like to learn.
T. Jeny
The sentence on which you written today\'s comment for me \"Try not to become a man of success but a man of value\" appealed to me.^^
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I will do remember the sentence always.
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Thank you! June 6 is the Memorial Day of Korea.
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That is all I know that day.
>>That is all I know on that day.
So I searched the internet about that day and I knew that the day is to remember soldiers killed in battle.
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It is important day for some people who went through the Korean war, but many people these days include me don\'t care about the day\'s meaning.
>>It is an important day for some people who went through the Korean war, but many people these days including me don\'t care about the day\'s meaning.
It is sad situation, because If there weren\'t the people who died for our country, we couldn\'t live like now peacefully.
>>It is a sad situation, because if there weren\'t people who died for our country, we couldn\'t live peacefully now.
I have to reflect on my indifference.^^;
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Anyway, I usually feel an attraction to the opposite sex\'s personality.
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But it is not restricted to opposite sex.
>> But it is not restricted to the opposite sex.
When I meet a person, I am usually fascinated my direct opposite.
>>When I meet a person, I am usually fascinated to a person who is directly opposite to me.
As you know, I think you already know my nature, I am a shy person and a poor talker.^^;
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So I am fascianted a person who has an outgoing personality.^^
>>So I am fascinated with a person who has an outgoing personality.^^
See you tomorrow!!
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