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2016-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Rewrite the following sentences, placing commas wherever they belong: 1. He likes to eat apples, oranges, and bananas. 2. Having spoken to him earlier, I was not surprised to hear the news. 3. This dish, when prepared correctly is very tasty. 4. We enjoy sailing but we enjoy swimming even more. 5. Robert the son of the painter is 35 years old. 6. Although we didn’t arrive on time, they still let us in. 7. I was born and raised in Los Angeles California. 8. He was a cruel heartless man. 9. Weren’t your parents from Portland Oregon? 10. Steve was born on June 26, 1985.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework!^^

I will wait for the next homework. Please make sure

that you review the uses of comma.

Have a great holiday!~

~~Teacher Erine~~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Rewrite the following sentences, placing commas wherever they belong:
1. He likes to eat apples, oranges, and bananas.

>> Correct
 2. Having spoken to him earlier, I was not surprised to hear the news.

>> Correct
 3. This dish, when prepared correctly is very tasty.

>> Correct
 4. We enjoy sailing but we enjoy swimming even more.

>> We enjoy sailing, but we enjoy swimming even more.
 5. Robert the son of the painter is 35 years old.

>> Robert, the son of the painter, is 35 years old.
 6. Although we didn’t arrive on time, they still let us in.

>> Correct
 7. I was born and raised in Los Angeles California.

>> I was born and raised in Los Angeles, California.
 8. He was a cruel heartless man.

>> He was a cruel, heartless man.
 9. Weren’t your parents from Portland Oregon?

>> Weren’t your parents from Portland, Oregon?
 10. Steve was born on June 26, 1985.

>> Correct

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