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2016-06-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I don't have special memories of high school. I was introverted. So I didn't have many friends. But I could meet my close friend who was very cute. I still am meeting her for 20 years. But we can't have much time together because she is living far away my house. Last I met her. We talked about a lot of things for a long time. I always miss her.

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Hi Ms. [이름], A blessed Tuesday to you! We are the same. I don\'t have a lot of friends from high school also. I have only a few but they are good friends. See you in class later. Take care! ~T. Lynn   I don\'t have special memories of high school. >> correct!I was introverted. >> I was an introvert.So I didn\'t have many friends. >>correct!But I could meet my close friend who was very cute. >> But I met my close friend who was very cute.I still am meeting her for 20 years. >> We have been friends for 20 years.But we can\'t have much time together because she is living far away from my house. >>correct!Last I met her. We talked about a lot of things for a long time. >> Last time I met her, we talked about a lot of things for a long time.I always miss her. >>correct!

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