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학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, the key to long life is the health.
If I have the bad health, I can not eat delious food, can not go to the trip and a lot of things.
So we have to do the execises for long life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
You are right, health is the key for a long life. As they say, health is wealth. See you later.
Take care,
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, the key to long life is the health.
>>In my opinion, the key to long life is health.If I have the bad health, I can not eat delious food, can not go to the trip and a lot of things.
>>If I am not healthy, I cannot eat delicious food, I cannot travel and do other things.So we have to do the execises for long life.
>>So we have to exercise to stay healthy and have a long life.
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