Homework

Hello, teacher. I confused the price of a new TV that I presented for my mother-in-law. I bought it 45,330 peso. You know, I'm no good with numbers.^^ Could you read and review the text below? Unification of a whole country, according to the above quotation, results from the conversion of other country’s people toward the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people. Why are they willing to head for the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people? This is because they are suffering from a tyrannical government, which doesn’t mind killing men. If other country also dispenses a benevolent government to the people, they would not feel the necessity of supporting the foreign country dispensing a benevolent government to the people. This shows that there should be a benevolent government in one country for satisfying a necessary condition for the unification. By contrast, there also should be a tyrannical government in other countries.

Hi there, Kaylee! That television costs the earth! Woah.  You really are the best daughter-in-law ever. Haha! I checked your composition below. Take note of my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!I confused the price of a new TV that I presented for my mother-in-law. >> I was confused with the price of the new TV that I bought for my mother-in-law.I bought it 45,330 peso. >> I bought it for 45,330 pesos.You know, I\'m no good with numbers.^^ >> You know, I\'m not good with numbers.Could you read and review the text below? >> CORRECT!Unification of a whole country, according to the above quotation, results from the conversion of other country’s people toward the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people. >> CORRECT!Why are they willing to head for the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people? >> Why are they willing to go to a country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people? This is because they are suffering from a tyrannical government, which doesn’t mind killing men. >> CORRECT!If other country also dispenses a benevolent government to the people, they would not feel the necessity of supporting the foreign country dispensing a benevolent government to the people. >> If other countries also dispense a benevolent government to the people, they would not feel the necessity of supporting a foreign country which does the same thing.This shows that there should be a benevolent government in one country for satisfying a necessary condition for the unification. >> This shows that there should be a benevolent government in one country to satisfy a necessary condition for the unification.By contrast, there also should be a tyrannical government in other countries. >> CORRECT!