homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't belive it.
In korea many people believe it, so famous fortune tellers are very popular.
In my opinion, it is just superstition like a fun story.
Sometimes, the bad story changes our life.
For example someone thinks about it at all time and someone is scared about it.
I hope many people remember a lot of good stories in their life and don't believe the bad story.
I hope they just believe themself.
강사 첨삭
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Happy Wednesday!
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~T. Lynn
I don\'t belive it.
>>correct!In korea many people believe it, so famous fortune tellers are very popular.
>>correct!In my opinion, it is just superstition like a fun story.
>>correct!Sometimes, the bad story changes our life.
>>Sometimes, a bad story changes our lives.For example someone thinks about it at all time and someone is scared about it.
>>For example someone thinks about it all the time and so he or she gets scared about it.I hope many people remember a lot of good stories in their life and don\'t believe the bad story.
>>I hope a lot of people remember a lot of good stories in ther lives and don\'t believe bad stories.I hope they just believe themself.
>>I hope they just believe in themselves.
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