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2016-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't belive it. In korea many people believe it, so famous fortune tellers are very popular. In my opinion, it is just superstition like a fun story. Sometimes, the bad story changes our life. For example someone thinks about it at all time and someone is scared about it. I hope many people remember a lot of good stories in their life and don't believe the bad story. I hope they just believe themself.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name]. [이름], Happy Wednesday! Wow! you did great in the homework. You have very good sentences. See you in class later. Take care! ~T. Lynn   I don\'t belive it. >>correct!In korea many people believe it, so famous fortune tellers are very popular. >>correct!In my opinion, it is just superstition like a fun story. >>correct!Sometimes, the bad story changes our life. >>Sometimes, a bad story changes our lives.For example someone thinks about it at all time and someone is scared about it. >>For example someone thinks about it all the time and so he or she gets scared about it.I hope many people remember a lot of good stories in their life and don\'t believe the bad story. >>I hope a lot of people remember a lot of good stories in ther lives and don\'t believe bad stories.I hope they just believe themself. >>I hope they just believe in themselves.

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