homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
A blessed Thursday to you!
Usually superstitious people are the people from the older generations. I believe the younger generation don\'t believe in superstitions anymore. See you tomorrow.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, they feel very lonely so they want to believe something like the superstitious.
>>In my opinion, they feel very lonely so they want to believe in something like superstitions.
I think it is not good.
>>correct!
I worry them who believe the superstitious.
>> I worry for those who believe superstitions.
I mentioned last my homework that superstitious is just fun story.
>> I mentioned on my last homework that superstitions are just funny stories.
Don\'t believe the superstitious, don\'t think it for a long time.
>> Don\'t believe in superstitions, don\'t think about it for a long time.
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