Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
As time goes by, I feel difficuty healing a hangover.
I must be older than before T.T
The text below is the next part of my paper.
To conclude, this article argues that a benevolent government here and a tyrannical one there, namely the difference of quality in politics is the necessary condition for unification.
When the necessary condition, the difference of quality in politics, is met, the next step for unification is to be known for a benevolent government in one country to foreign countries.
With regard this matter, Mencius insists as below.
While quoting Confucius’s saying, “the flowing progress of virtue is more rapid than the transmission of royal orders by stages and couriers.”, Mencius strongly believes the spreading power and influence of a benevolent government.
Moreover, he considers this phenomenon to widely spread to foreign countries, not to be confined to domestic region.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee! Don\'t worry, you\'re not the only one who feels that way. We all feel the same way as we get older.
I reviewed your composition below. Please check my corrections.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! As time goes by, I feel difficuty healing a hangover.
>> As time goes by, it\'s hard for me to cure a hangover.I must be older than before T.T
>> I must be getting older.The text below is the next part of my paper.
>> CORRECT! To conclude, this article argues that a benevolent government here and a tyrannical one there, namely the difference of quality in politics is the necessary condition for unification.
>> CORRECT! When the necessary condition, the difference of quality in politics, is met, the next step for unification is to be known for a benevolent government in one country to foreign countries.
>> CORRECT! With regard this matter, Mencius insists as below.
>> With regard to this matter, Mencius insists the following:While quoting Confucius’s saying, “the flowing progress of virtue is more rapid than the transmission of royal orders by stages and couriers.”, Mencius strongly believes the spreading power and influence of a benevolent government.
>> CORRECT! Moreover, he considers this phenomenon to widely spread to foreign countries, not to be confined to domestic region.
>> Moreover, he considers this phenomenon to widely spread to foreign countries, not to be confined to domestic regions.
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