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2016-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teahcher. Could you read and review the text below? As the above quotation shows, the countries from all directions were already aware of the benevolent government in other country. Moreover, the people from all directions were complaining about why a true royal sovereign delays conquering our own countries. The reason for that is because they are the people who were suffering from a tyrannical government. To sum up, in the second step for Mencius’s unification theory, the news about the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people spreads throughout the countries from all directions. As a result, the people suffering from a tyrannical government can realize the difference of politics in quality between these two countries. subtitle : Direction of Public Sentiment and Absorptive Unification The last step of Mencius’s unification theory is absorptive unification into the country which dispenses a benevolent government.

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Hi there, Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please let me know if I misunderstood something. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teahcher. >> CORRECT! >> teacherCould you read and review the text below?>> CORRECT! As the above quotation shows, the countries from all directions were already aware of the benevolent government in other country. >> As the above quotation shows, the countries from all over the world were already aware of the benevolent government in other countries.Moreover, the people from all directions were complaining about why a true royal sovereign delays conquering our own countries. >> Moreover, the people from other countries were complaining about why a true royal sovereign would delay conquering their own countries. *I\'m not sure if I understood this right.The reason for that is because they are the people who were suffering from a tyrannical government. >> CORRECT!To sum up, in the second step for Mencius’s unification theory, the news about the country which dispenses a benevolent government to the people spreads throughout the countries from all directions. >> To sum it up, in the second step for Mencius’s unification theory, the news about the country, which dispenses a benevolent government to the people, spreads throughout different countries from all directions.As a result, the people suffering from a tyrannical government can realize the difference of politics in quality between these two countries.>> As a result, the people suffering from a tyrannical government will realize the difference in the quality of politics between these two countries.subtitle : Direction of Public Sentiment and Absorptive Unification>> CORRECT!The last step of Mencius’s unification theory is absorptive unification into the country which dispenses a benevolent government. >> CORRECT! 

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