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2016-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, there were many strange stories in my country. For example, someone dreamed of pigs last night, next day he or she can get good luck. They believe it, I don't know why. I guess when I was young, many Korean people were very poor so they wanted be rich like pigs which are very fat. The rich people can eat a lof of food like pigs. So they think symbols of pigs are rich people. So that is a reason why they believe this story. But I think it is just strange story.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name]. [이름],

I think the believe in superstitions is common around the world a long time ago. Nowadays, only a few people believe it but there are still people who believe it. In my country, several people from the province still believe in superstitions. Let\'s talk about it more in our class. See you.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

When I was young, there were many strange stories in my country.

>>correct!
For example, someone dreamed of pigs last night, next day he or she can get good luck.

>>For example, if someone dreamed of pigs last night, it means the next day he or she can get good luck.
They believe it, I don\'t know why.

>>correct!
I guess when I was young, many Korean people were very poor so they wanted to be rich like pigs which are very fat.

>>correct
The rich people can eat a lot of food like pigs.

>>correct
So they think symbols of pigs are rich people.

>> So they think pigs symbolizes rich people.
So that is a reason why they believe this story.

>>So that\'s the reason why they believe this story.
But I think it is just strange story.

>>correct!

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