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2016-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi Teacher thank you for your kind correction for yesterday's mail. could you please check below mail contect? Please take a look at below details for Yongin store. 1. Symptoms : The power suddenly shut off and the motor didn’t worked. 2. Problems : The power didn’t delivered from KBVF-2P6D(6492) Motor speed control board with RFI filter to AC motor and AC motor power didn’t came out. The button for MAX,MIN ,CL adjustment also didn’t worked. 3. The motor worked normally after replace of KBVF-2P6D.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Sarah!   You are very much welcome my dear. It\'s my pleasure to help you. Just feel free to send your mails. I will check them for you.   _Teacher Dianne   Hi Teacher >> Hi teacher,thank you for your kind correction for yesterday\'s mail. >> Thank you for your kind correction for yesterday\'s mail. (Capitalize the first letter of  a sentence)could you please check below mail contect? >> Could you please check the mail\'s content or context below? (Capitalize the first letter of  a sentence)Please take a look at below details for Yongin store. >> Please take a look at the details for Yongin store below.1. Symptoms : The power suddenly shut off and the motor didn’t worked. >> 1. Symptoms: The power suddenly shut off and the motor didn’t work. (didn\'t is in its past so the verb next to it should be in the present tense)2. Problems : The power didn’t delivered from KBVF-2P6D(6492) Motor speed control board with RFI filter to AC motor and AC motor power didn’t came out. The button for MAX,MIN ,CL adjustment also didn’t worked. >> 2. Problems: The power didn’t deliver from KBVF-2P6D (6492) and the motor speed control board with RFI filter to AC motor power didn’t come out. The button for MAX, MIN, and CL adjustment also didn’t work.3. The motor worked normally after replace of KBVF-2P6D. >> The motor worked normally after replacing it with KBVF-2P6D. >> Or: The motor worked properly after the replacement of KBVF-2P6D.

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